Indebted: A Sin from Ashes by Khai L. Bayne

Indebted: A Sin from Ashes by Khai L. Bayne

Review by Susan Alexander

Overall Rating: 4/5 Stars

Pages: 204

Purchase Link: http://amzn.com/B00JPJPB6A

Synopsis:

Theodore calls the last person in the world he knew would willingly help him, Artisyn. The beautiful seductress from his past. Because of their not so amicable parting he has to force her hand by calling in his claim on the vow she made to repay him.

After two years of self-imposed exile, Ex-Special Operative Artisyn Daniels receives a phone call from the last person in the world that she wants to hear from. Theodore Mezzanetti and he is summoning her to return.  

She is thrust in with a team of Theodore's men, who are to help her assimilate back into the world of espionage, sex, and BDSM, to find the person responsible for killing women in an abusive and sadistic manner. Her goal... Repay her debt, then cut all ties to her past life, once and for all. Will she be able to trust Theodore to keep his word?

Will they be able to complete the mission before the killer strikes again? Emotions run high, as feelings develop, truths are revealed, and a dark secret comes to light.

THIS STORY IS INTENDED FOR ADULTS. THAT'S PEOPLE OF CONSENTING AGE IN THEIR RESPECTIVE COUNTRIES. HELL LET'S JUST JUST MAKE THIS EASY. MAKE SURE YOU'RE 18+ BEFORE YOU ONE CLICK! PLEASE AND THANKS 

Review:

Khai L. Bayne has weaved a creative paranormal story with all the elements to capture your attention—suspense, high emotions, sexy (Oh, yeah), steamy (Oh, my God), heat scorching sizzling where you burn and blush like you need to jump in the cold waters off the coast of Alaska (Hell, yeah) and nail biting tension. I loved Artisyn’s strong alpha female character and how she commanded her team of four men both inside and outside the bedroom. I felt for Theodore who was trying to right his wrong with Artisyn, and I was sad that life didn’t work to his advantage.

As far as the writing, there are areas for improvement. Throughout the book there were either words missing or repeated in the same sentence. This tends to slow down a reader. Another proof of the book would be well warranted. There were also instances where there were several people in a scene and at times I couldn’t tell who was where. Some characters even appeared out of nowhere and I had to go back a few pages to see what they were doing or where they came from.

Overall, I’m interested in the next book as the ending indicates. Finally, I was extremely moved by the dedication of this book. Authors do put in an enormous amount of heart and soul into their writing and it’s the people around them that ride their journey with them.

This book is not for the faint-of-heart. So reader take note of the author’s warning.